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New Song

Posted: Mon Oct 27, 2008 9:04 am
by Kano
hey i wrote a new song i realy like this big jumpy feel to the song and the solo/riff follows the vocal line lol
so yeh tell me what u think its called sick of it all

This is a story about a boy who’s living alone at home
His drinking habits are pretty bad but his still all alone
Theres a girl of coarse but she don’t know who he is
He’s pretty annoyed about the way things are is this all bliss?

(Riff/Solo)

He’s got a plan to leave this place and find his way out
Get away from pop culture and not feel left out
He’s got a guitar a single guitar with only six strings
He plays every single day wishing one day he’ll be king

Sick of it all
Pushing down on him
Sick of it all
Gotta get away from the shit
Sick of it all
Doubt it is gunna work
But if it does
Well if it does
He’s gunna feel real good

(Riff/Solo)

Nice to see he’s getting there faster than he thought
That girl I mentioned before well she’s been left in the dirt
He’s found a girl a cool girl and she is perfect
But he’s sort of got this idea that people don’t get

Sick of it all
Pushing down on him
Sick of it all
Gotta get away from the shit
Sick of it all
Doubt it is gunna work
But if it does
Well if it does
He’s gunna feel real good

Sick of it all
Pushing down on him
Sick of it all
Gotta get away from the shit
Sick of it all
Doubt it is gunna work
But if it does
Well if it does
He’s gunna feel real good

(Solo)

Sick of it all
Pushing down on him
Sick of it all
Gotta get away from the shit
Sick of it all
Doubt it is gunna work
But if it does
Well if it does
He’s gunna feel real good—
Feel real good
Feel real good---
He’s gunna
Well he gunna
Well he’s gunna
Make this all work

Re: New Song

Posted: Mon Oct 27, 2008 11:01 am
by Shiv
:D
its good lol
im not a fan of the chorus but the rest is good

Re: New Song

Posted: Mon Oct 27, 2008 9:27 pm
by wiggs1441
its pretty good

Re: New Song

Posted: Tue Nov 04, 2008 10:56 pm
by tomhoppus
Holy ass cock.