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If Guilt Could Hang You From a Nail...

Posted: Fri Aug 15, 2008 6:17 am
by withchappedlips
It's so cold as I leave your room.
I'm warm in sweat and wet in tears.
Leaving was the hardest thing to do
Leaving always is the hardest thing to do.
Someone's gotta do it.

She'll cry just a bit
Losing hope, losing it
I'll regret what I've done, I know it.
I'll go home for a fix
Getting high, I deal with this
My day gets calm and I lie
asleep on my bed

Now it's late, I dream about us
I can't believe I'd doubt us
I don't know what I've done
I don't know why I'd do what I've done
I guess I had to do it

She'll cry just a bit
Losing hope, losing it
I'll regret what I've done, I know it.

I know she's sad, I know she's missing
I know I'm cold, I know I'm pathetic
I know it all. I know it all. I'll live with it.
Someone's gotta live with it.

She's the paper I use to write on
I used to write on
I threw it all away
She's the pen I use to write with
I used to write with
The ink has gone away

Re: If Guilt Could Hang You From a Nail...

Posted: Fri Aug 15, 2008 4:09 pm
by wiggs1441
:dance:

Re: If Guilt Could Hang You From a Nail...

Posted: Fri Aug 15, 2008 6:33 pm
by HilgaMan
You wrote that song for me..? Coz it's like just from my life... Amazing Kyle, amazing.

Re: If Guilt Could Hang You From a Nail...

Posted: Tue Aug 19, 2008 2:07 am
by withchappedlips
Thank you.

I love my last line, but it might be twisted a bit. I wrote it like "she's the pen i use to write with" meaning just a pen.. then I say "I used to write with" which means I used to write with the pen. you use pens until you lose them or die, and then just throw them away. which is what i'm saying about her. i used her until i got sick of her. same goes with the paper. it's totally made up and uninspired... so i don't like it that much.. the whole song.

Re: If Guilt Could Hang You From a Nail...

Posted: Sat Aug 30, 2008 12:33 am
by Hentaiman
Kinda hard to know if its supposed to be fast or slow and all, but I liked the lyrics. I had some melody for it in my mind.

Re: If Guilt Could Hang You From a Nail...

Posted: Sun Aug 31, 2008 6:00 am
by spider-man
almost seems like something by box car racer I think

Re: If Guilt Could Hang You From a Nail...

Posted: Mon Sep 01, 2008 8:09 pm
by the perfect li e
good even if it was written completly without the input of emotions and all.

Re: If Guilt Could Hang You From a Nail...

Posted: Fri Sep 05, 2008 4:14 am
by withchappedlips
Hentaiman wrote:Kinda hard to know if its supposed to be fast or slow and all, but I liked the lyrics. I had some melody for it in my mind.
When I go about writing a song, I want to make it as tricky as possible in regards to what it will sound like as a composition. It's a slower song, but it has a bit of fast in it at parts.