2 verses, need a chorus.
You turn me off at the push of a button
And you pretend that I don't mean nothing
I'm not a saint that's easy to tell
But guess what honey you ain't no angel
You like to scream, use words as a weapon
Well go head take your best shot woman
I wanna leave you it's easy to see
But guess what honey it's not that easy
I wanna run and escape from your prison
But when I leave I feel something is missing
I'm not afraid that's easy to tell
This can't be heaven it feels like I'm in hell
Your like a drug that I can't stop taking
I want more and I can't stop craving
I still want you it's easy to see
But guess what honey your not that good for me
Don't laugh!
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Re: Don't laugh!
Nothing else better to do today?
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Re: Don't laugh!
You don't need a chorus; you need is a bridge to jump off of.
but I know I can't be comfortable in my own skin.
So when I say I'm scared to be alone, you know I mean it,
I'm just not ready to leave my room.
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Re: Don't laugh!
I might have idea for chorus. It could be this big sounding anthem with lot of whoaa's and only one line.
(Whoah)
Go make me sandwich
(Whoah)
Go make me sandwich
etc.
(Whoah)
Go make me sandwich
(Whoah)
Go make me sandwich
etc.
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Re: Don't laugh!
samueeL wrote:I might have idea for chorus. It could be this big sounding anthem with lot of whoaa's and only one line.
(Whoah)
Go make me sandwich
(Whoah)
Go make me sandwich
etc.
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Re: Don't laugh!
I feel loved!
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