this song was inspired by "Scar Tissue" by RHCP (idk why lol it just was). it's about drug addiction. it's not a personal song at all, nor has this happened to anyone I kno of.
Verse 1
Awakened by the need
Of my body's desperate plead
For an evil sensation
To satisfy my temptation
The one and only thrill
Does nothing but kill
All of my free will
And keeps me in darkness
Chorus
Unintentionally
Hurting those around me
As I destroy my soul
Hypnotized, paralyzed
They strip me of control
Verse 2
Opening lids not for me
Creates the haze I see
Heartache leads from injection
To lines on a reflection
Fading my complexion
I know I need to quit
But I'm desperate for a hit
I'll get to the moon if I gotta crawl
(Chorus)
Bridge
Clutching myself so tight
Convulsing day and night
Pouring out what's left of me
Apparition's all I see
Ringing in both ears
Hours go on for years
Nowhere to go so here I lye
Pain's so strong I'd rather die
(Chorus)
Paralyzed
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lol you probably shouldn't write songs about things you have no experience with
All that I need is time for me to breathe. Dream little dreams that only I believe. Now that I see beyond the light, I'm gonna be, I'll be alright.
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I agree.Tyler41 wrote:lol you probably shouldn't write songs about things you have no experience with
...it is a pretty good song though, not gonna lie.
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You don't always have to write about things you went through, sometimes you write songs about things that happen around you in the world. I think the lyrics are great. :)
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exactly. and thank you :)lisaNL wrote:You don't always have to write about things you went through, sometimes you write songs about things that happen around you in the world. I think the lyrics are great. :)
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Totally agree.lisaNL wrote:You don't always have to write about things you went through, sometimes you write songs about things that happen around you in the world. I think the lyrics are great. :)
Great job!
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thank you!SickofEveryone wrote:Totally agree.lisaNL wrote:You don't always have to write about things you went through, sometimes you write songs about things that happen around you in the world. I think the lyrics are great. :)
Great job!