You never knew-
Intro
I lay here on my bed
Wishing for my path to bend
Its just all gonna stop
As its falling end to end
Now only you knew---
Verse 1
I guess it’s just up to me
To say the things you couldn’t see
I now know how its gonna be
Just between you and me
Now let me say….
Chorus
You never, you never you never--- knew---
You never, you never you never--- knew---
Verse 2
Now im stuck between my choices
I don’t think I can choose
Now if you can’t make your mind up
I guess your go--ing to lose
You never, you never you never knew---
You never, you never you never knew---
Solo
Chorus-Outro
Its all over its all done
Now I know that ive become
the thing you---
never, you never you never knew---
You never, you never you never knew---
thoughts on the song?? i know the verses r a bit short but i couldnt think of anything else, any places for improvement?
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Re: New Song- You never knew
lol J-pan i like it very very cool
but the versus arnt to short its the chorus DUH! lol
but the versus arnt to short its the chorus DUH! lol
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Re: New Song- You never knew
well said my n00bKano wrote:lol J-pan i like it very very cool
and well done my grand-n00b
NoReason27 is my mastah.
Kano and Still Waiting are my official n00bs. Mess with them and before you know it you'll be working in Nickelodeon
J-pan, xmarryxx and conspiracyof1000 are my grandn00bs and T. is my brothah
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Re: New Song- You never knew
Gibsum 41 wrote:well said my nephewKano wrote:lol J-pan i like it very very cool
and well done my grand-nephew
I made it fit for me i think........
ConeBizzy32 wrote:Working on your request makes me a PD? I can't believe how small a man can be.Something Corporate wrote: I still cant get into the PD media sec
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tomhoppus wrote:Gibsum 41 wrote:well said my nephewKano wrote:lol J-pan i like it very very cool
and well done my grand-nephew
I made it fit for me i think........
lol nice man hahah I GET RID OF SIZE
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Re: New Song- You never knew
k ill work on a longer chorus but it only really sounds right (maybe its just me) when u sing it rightKano wrote:lol J-pan i like it very very cool
but the versus arnt to short its the chorus DUH! lol
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Re: New Song- You never knew
What's the -- for?
but I know I can't be comfortable in my own skin.
So when I say I'm scared to be alone, you know I mean it,
I'm just not ready to leave my room.
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Re: New Song- You never knew
for an extended soundKyle_ftl wrote:What's the -- for?