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BrandonCorey
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Verse 1
Where do I want to go?
Believe me, I do not know
I can’t help it, I’m just unsure
What my life has in store

Chorus
Who am I supposed to be?
Where do I belong in society?
Look at me, what do you see?
Accomplished goals or shattered dreams?

Verse 2
Am I what you hoped for?
Is this what you expected, or more?
This life is like a mystery
I’m just a victim of reality

Chorus
Who am I supposed to be?
Where do I belong in society?
Look at me, what do you see?
Accomplished goals or shattered dreams?

Verse 3
Am I going in the right direction?
The way to my own perfection
I’m on a journey so I can find
The inner self lost in my mind


Chorus
Who am I supposed to be?
Where do I belong in society?
Look at me, what do you see?
Accomplished goals or shattered dreams?


This is one of my first songs. It's FAR from good but let me know what you think and if you can help me out with some lyrics or a title.
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Post by Nic »

I like. Nice work.
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Thanks alot man. :)
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nice job
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Thanks again.
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Post by Spencer »

i like it a lot. its really good and you could have a guitar solo in there and stuff too if you wanted
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Hey nice work i love it !!!
you have the same style as me wow seriously u rock :D
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