Been a while since I last posted a song (I'll Be Waiting), so here's a fairly new one. It's called 'Fool's Poem'. Also, my band will (we hope to) be releasing our record on the 28th, so I'll post it on tns for you guys. I actually posted a preview of it on our myspace www.myspace.com/churchdestroymusic
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I'll stand in the window of life and wave as you leave,
and the feeling depressed in my chest makes it to hard to breathe,
like the time when I stood on the deck of a ship going down,
and the look on your face told me I'd be replaced in the hour,
And i'm trying to write the words to a love song,
but they're just not coming cause I'm not in love,
and I just can't belive that I gave you some meaning,
I gave you too much your deserving of none
I'll stand in the window of life and wave you along
And the look in your eyes tell me ive been despised for so long
Like the time when we took our clothes off and danced in the rain,
and now we're alone all you do is moan and complain
And i'm trying to write the words to a love song,
but they're just not coming cause I'm not in love,
and I just can't belive that I gave you some meaning,
I gave you too much your deserving of none
[bridge]
Come sit in my arms
and talk of the stars
said what do you think
of how lucky we are
To live life and lose love
Is made to be set
and although im better
I live with regret
And i'm trying to write the words to a love song,
but they're just not coming cause I'm not in love,
and I just can't belive that I gave you some meaning,
I gave you too much your deserving of none
I'll stand in the window of life in hope you'll return
and for so long ive been wrong but I guess that I'll never learn
Somehow I think you'll come back to me give me a sign
And just like before when you walked out my door last time
And i'm trying to write the words to a love song,
but they're just not coming cause I'm not in love,
and I just can't belive that I gave you some meaning,
I gave you too much your deserving of none
Fool's Poem
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Re: Fool's Poem
omg, thats so beautiful and sad, it nearly brought tears to my eyes. your an incredible lyricist. and i love the title.
if you like this Q&A, then you should read my story:Jan 22, 2009
cone u r so fucking kool stevo u r fucking bizzyd u r cool too whats your new album called
asked by cone1212 on Jan 21, 2009 5:03pm
Contrary to what you just wrote, I'm not fucking bizzy d. We're just friends. Let's not go and make Cone jealous now...
answered by Stevo on Jan 22, 2009 2:18pm
http://theresnosolution.com/forum/viewt ... =25&t=5382
UPDATED!
Still Waiting is my amazing master
GreenReem41 and Sara41 are my awsome noobs
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Re: Fool's Poem
so long goodbye lyrics????Dan wrote:and talk of the stars
said what do you think
of how lucky we are
just kidding
its good...real good
cant wait to hear the actual song
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Re: Fool's Poem
Thats really good :O
And the Sample of your EP sounds great too, hope to hear it soon :D
And the Sample of your EP sounds great too, hope to hear it soon :D
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Re: Fool's Poem
Thanks for the comments guys.
If all goes well, you should hear the EP by monday... not promising anything yet.
If all goes well, you should hear the EP by monday... not promising anything yet.
Re: Fool's Poem
thats pretty inspiring... its hard to write songs about things, & youve incorporated that into a song...good :)