Hey, I would want your opinions on my first song :)
http://soundcloud.com/lowsick1/differents-ways-final
Ps: Sorry, I've a french accent :S and i'm not a singer
Thx :)
and for sum 41's cover : http://soundcloud.com/lowsick1/ :)
My first compo
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Re: My first compo
A stronger voice and it would be quite good actually.
Other than that it feels incredibly sad.
Other than that it feels incredibly sad.
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Re: My first compo
Very sad.... But why is cartman singing? Kidding, love ya really
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Re: My first compo
I know, my voice sucks at some parts but i do my best for the moment, my voice is better day after day :)
Thanks for your opinions,That helps me
I need more :)
Thanks for your opinions,That helps me
I need more :)
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Re: My first compo
Yeah I think it was pretty nice. If you sing a bit louder and more confident it will be great
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Re: My first compo
I like it! It's a sad song, and agree about the vocals being a bit weak. But you're trying your best I know, so I think it definetely has potential to become a great song :)
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Re: My first compo
Dude, if your voice is improving then you are lucky, mine just stays the same tuneless ol' bastard it always was Keep at itLowsick wrote:I know, my voice sucks at some parts but i do my best for the moment, my voice is better day after day :)
Thanks for your opinions,That helps me
I need more :)
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Re: My first compo
Pretty good for a first song!
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Re: My first compo
Thx for your comments
And i see sum 41 at Friday, i'm Fucking existing !
And i see sum 41 at Friday, i'm Fucking existing !